Date: February 14, 2012 02:45 PM Title: Meeting
I agree completely with Letterou, the important thing is you are enjoying your story and having fun. The more you explore, the better off your writing will be, even if it is OOC. So please continue your fantasy, but I do have one suggestion. If your scentance structure and grammar was tweaked a bit, ( as young writers, we're often challenged with this) I think it would help ease up the flow. Anyway, keep it up.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'll take note of your advice and try to put it to good use.
Date: February 08, 2012 02:50 AM Title: Meeting
Your story reminds me of the kind of thing I wrote years ago. This kind of character is known as a 'Mary-Sue' and most writers have written one along their journey.
You're having lots of fun, clearly and you should be proud of continuting your story for so long. Writing commitment is a big issue and getting practised at that will help you in your future endeavours.
Author's Response: This is my biggest fantasy, working along side the Joker and, most especcially, Harley Quinn. Harley's my idol, and it's because of her that I'm working towards becoming a psychologist. Joker and Harley are the best pairing ever, and Jester is planning on pushing the brighter side of their relationship to the rest of the world. And you're right, I am having fun (especially since I act out the scenes (most of them at least)and I am proud. This fanfic is my life and I'm planning on seeing it through to the end.
Date: June 28, 2010 11:24 AM Title: cell time, rec room, and... a visitor?
Like it :) I would love it if Jester could read Mista J's mind ;D hehee keepup the Great work :)
Author's Response: She can, and she will. Thanks for the review! I'll get started right away.
Date: March 09, 2010 02:20 AM Title: Arkham Arrival
No first timer at Arkham is gonna think it's pleasing! And the staff wouldn't let her be placed wherever she wants! It's a place for the criminally insane, not a hostel.
Author's Response: Yeah. but you have no idea what one look in my big bright eyes does. I have seven game systems because of it.
Date: November 23, 2009 05:06 PM Title: Jester Meets Ivy
Sorry about the reviews coming in slow, but I'll keep reviewing and reading anyway. Keep it up because I can't wait to see what happens on her first job. Oh and good job on the story too, it's getting better and better with each chapter.
Author's Response: I'm a little stuck on the next chapter, so it might take a while.
Date: November 16, 2009 07:43 PM Title: Meeting
I think this fic could really go somewhere, it has an interesting premise but your writing way too fast. What i mean is your not giving readers enough time to get invested in this new character. if you add more details and insight i feel this fic could dramatically improve
Author's Response: thank you so much i will take your advice to heart and put it in my story.
Date: November 13, 2009 10:43 PM Title: Join the Clowny Crew!
Hey, good good good story. But one thing, when a new person starts to talk (like joker was talking, and then batman started talking and then back to the joker) press enter. You know to start a new paragraph. That will help the story be clearer and make more sense. So it will be more fun to read. But other wise, good story. I'm really enjoying it. Keep it up!
Author's Response: thank you so much for your help. i deeply and sincerely appreciate it.
Date: November 12, 2009 12:58 PM Title: Meeting
Joker would have killed her instantly, she's not of really any use to him.
Author's Response: I know, but i'm sure that when i get the next chapter up, you'll relize he might enjoy pulling pranks on her which will most likely get her agrivated and that will make him enjoy it more.