Date: October 06, 2009 03:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
You aren't a native English speaker? Really? Hm. Surprising, because I really didn't pick that up at all, your writing flowed very nicely :) There were a few spots that needed work...mostly just off-setting the dialogue, but in general, it was really good! I loved the idea of Harley manipulating the Joker, and her reading him a bedtime story. I can so picture that! Keep writing! :)
Author's Response: Thanks :) I also love the idea of the bedtime story.