[Report This]Date: October 17, 2012 02:55 PM Title: The Capture
This always puts a smile to my face. One of my fave fanfiction authors! Please write more!!
Date: June 07, 2012 10:05 PM Title: The Lesson
Oh! I love! I cried have of it. The joker is so mean! He makes me mad because Harley rocks.
[Report This]Date: June 23, 2010 07:06 AM Title: The Lesson
This is great!
[Report This]Date: August 30, 2009 09:06 PM Title: The Rescue
Awesome! You've done a very good job with this story! I love this chapter, I shoulda know Joker would use Harl to get Batman, because Batsy never could resist a damsel in distress now could he?
[Report This]Date: August 30, 2009 09:01 PM Title: The Truth
OMG! noooo....but YEAH! I was starting to get sucked into the fluff right along with Ms. Quinn, damnit!
Date: August 30, 2009 08:52 PM Title: The Capture
YAY!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: August 18, 2009 05:06 PM Title: The Escape
loved it! hmmm write more possibly?
Date: January 08, 2009 07:07 PM Title: The Capture
i LOVE it. it makes me all giddy inside :). hehe
Date: October 23, 2008 01:53 AM Title: The Escape
WOW! You hit the nail on the head!!! It kept me hooked until the very end! Disturbing yet Sexy. If this were a graphic novel I would own it and read it over and over again!
[Report This]Date: September 30, 2008 03:44 AM Title: The Lesson
Hrmmm. This story felt very rushed and as though you didn't really think it through. To be honest, I got the overwhelming feeling that you were writing what you thought people wanted to read without giving a lot of thought to characterisation, suspense and intrigue. When someone commented it seemed out of character, you immediately changed direction - something tells me you didn't plan for the story to go the way it did. Maybe I'm wrong, but if I am then I have to say this story did not ring true for me.
I felt your characterisation had glimmers of Joker and Harley there but was largely off the mark. Joker in particular was not his charming, intriguing self.
I don't want to discourage you as I think you have potential and you should definitely keep writing and practicing. I just feel you really need to think about what you're writing and take more care with it as well as go for more than just shock value.
For example, having Joker swear a lot just makes him sound childish. Joker is a man who is careful with the way he speaks; it's part of his performance. Making him swear every second word is lazy.
I think you have the right idea of who the characters are and you know who they are inside - I just feel you need more practice in depicting that. Don't rush, and look for a beta reader to help out.
Author's Response: Thank You SO much. This is truely a review I have been looking for. I'm still an amateur at writing, but I hope to improve thorugh every story I write. Thank you for all the advice.
[Report This]Date: September 25, 2008 02:56 PM Title: The Lesson
Awww it's over T_T
Lol, it was awesome though :)
[Report This]Date: September 24, 2008 10:10 AM Title: The Rescue
Aww! This is so good! Harley is just too cute, and the joker's being a big meanie!! Cant wait for the update!!
[Report This]Date: September 22, 2008 03:27 AM Title: The Rescue
GREAT JOB
Date: September 22, 2008 12:07 AM Title: The Rescue
Wow. Two new chapters. You update fast. I love it!!!!
Date: September 21, 2008 08:06 PM Title: The Escape
i really like this, but i feel sad for harley. cant wait for more =)
[Report This]Date: September 21, 2008 05:24 PM Title: The Escape
Awww poor Harley D:
But that's the Joker for ya XD
He's totally in character now :P
Awesome story can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: September 21, 2008 11:54 AM Title: The Escape
I dunno, I liked the first chapter quite a bit but then it started to get really out of character I thought.
Author's Response: Be sure to read Chapter 4 when it comes out, it might be 'out of character' now but thats intentional. It will make sense in future chapters! (:
[Report This]Date: September 21, 2008 11:53 AM Title: The Connection
Wow. That was a quick update. But good, none the less! Keep 'em coming!
Date: September 21, 2008 02:40 AM Title: The Escape
Oh, add another chapter! This is very very good!
[Report This]Date: September 20, 2008 11:15 PM Title: The Capture
Wow. I LOVE this fic!
You should continue it.
That would be awesome :D
[Report This]Date: September 20, 2008 09:17 PM Title: The Escape
I am in love with this already :)
Can't wait for the next chapter!!
[Report This]Date: September 20, 2008 08:12 PM Title: The Escape
Oooh I'm such a fangirl! Of course I want more!